rooster’s crow
assaults dawn’s solitude
shattering revery
red–purple- –
deep blue hues
leak through
the window
glow beginning
slow awakening
from dreams
dragging thoughts
– -dead weight
through a field
while falling
down a mountain
– -dragging thoughts
beyond
the star dust
in your eyes
warmth
in your arms- -body,
baby hold me
before I fall again
– -hold me- -explore
these depths, love
hides in there
pleading
hungry
the motions- -radiant,
warm currents flow
move in,
toss the bags anywhere
– -move in to me
– -electric needs
knows
want’s path leads beyond
the blue hue pooling
of desire- -feed
on honey kisses
my skin tingles
in this awakening
to star dust
in your eyes
Copyright 2010, by Suzie Ashby.
This picture is amazing.
You always have amazing diction…”shattering,” “dragging…”
I am so glad you like it. Thank you for the comment on my diction. It is nice to know someone pays attention. I hope all is going very well for you. Much light and sweetness in your life, girl.
I really liked the transition of tone, from the feeling of cracked-open eyes and dragging yourself out of sleep to waking up to the person you want to see. A very nice piece.
Well, thank you very much. I am glad you liked that part, honestly, now that you point it out it was another one of those cerebral things that just happened while in the “flow”. Light & Blessings.